Today I have been receiving feedback on the rough cut from fellow students, my teacher and a couple friends.
The all agreed that the editing and shot types used were very good. The only constructive critism I got was that It needs an extra shot of the artist for the video to be interesting and take it up a level. By this I don't intend to get another shot of her lip syncing but more shots of the artist walking.
Something that resembles the lyrics 'Whats going on'
Fellow students told me that my editing and cut aways work well with each other and that my lip syncing is all in time. There are certain points in my music video rough cut where I don't agree with this..there are still a couple of clips I have to shuffle ever so slowly one way or the other to get the perfect timing.
This could be hard to get more time with Meg(The artist who sings the song) but hopefully it is possible.
I had the idea of having Meg walk up a hill (perhaps castle hill) then have her looking over Cambridge. We could include POV(Point Of View) shots with this which is a shot I haven't yet included with my video.
Another idea is if we can't get the artist for more time to shoot then to film some of Cambridges main attractions to add to the video. This wont be as good but would fit into the theme of our video.
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